"Thinky Thoughts" about writing

Suggested by kres

Take the first line from one of your stories, the line you are fond of, and then analyze it. 

I'm not very good at this sort of thing, but I'll play!  This is the first line from my story Once Bitten, which kicked off the First and Foremost series:

It wasn't that Daniel didn't like Colonel O'Neill  

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