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[sid]

nangi_akki requested:  Five times Jack didn't use his safeword (but probably should have)

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NC-17, BDSM

Five times Jack didn't use his safeword (but probably should have) 

1. Jack got a head rush, on top of the usual rush, the moment he draped himself over Daniel's knees. It wasn't for a spanking this time. Daniel had already paddled him soundly as he had bent over the foot of the bed. Now he was on Daniel's lap awaiting the insertion of their newest toy. A slender vibrator designed specifically for prostate massage.

When Daniel slid it inside him, when Jack felt the buzz stroking over his happy place, white sparks burst behind his eyes and he heard his blood pounding in his ears. He always loved it when Daniel touched him there, and he had certainly had vibrators up his ass before. But this little wonder was different; the vibrations were so delightfully concentrated on that one magic spot.

Daniel slowly closed his thighs around Jack's prick as he worked the toy in and out, and Jack bucked. "Nghh!" Electrical shocks ran through his body, and he tasted blood where he had bitten his lip. A few more strokes and Jack was coming, seeing bright white flashes, followed by fireworks displaying themselves behind his tightly closed eyelids.

Coming down, dizzy, he opened his eyes to find the world turning gray. Color leaching from the carpet; spots appearing, sparkling. Panting, he watched as the darkness on the periphery of his vision grew and spread rapidly inward.

When Jack opened his eyes next, he was on the floor, staring blankly at the legs of the overturned chair Daniel had been sitting on. A wave of nausea rolled through his stomach, and he groaned. And then Daniel was there, kneeling beside him, wiping the cold sweat gently from his face and neck with a damp towel. “I passed out?” Jack croaked.

Daniel peered into his eyes anxiously. “How do you feel?”

“Like crap.”

“You scared the crap out of me, that’s for sure.” Daniel wiped at the palms of Jack’s hands. “Wonder if I can get a refund on that damn thing.” His voice was shaking, just a little.

“Um, maybe it wasn’t entirely the vibrator’s fault, Danny.” Jack bit his lip. “Ow!” He licked at the sore spot.

“What?” Daniel's brows drew together.

“I was kinda dizzy before you even put the thing in.” Jack looked as apologetic as he could manage. There was a long silence.

“And you’re telling me this now?” Daniel asked coolly.

Oh, fuck!  

~~~~

2. Jack just assumed Daniel was going for asymmetry. The clamp on his left nipple hurt, while the one on the right was almost comfortable in comparison. Daniel did that sometimes. So, even though it hurt a lot more than usual, Jack said nothing.

When Daniel removed the clamps, Jack hissed in pain, and Daniel hissed in shock. One of the tips was damaged, and a jagged bit had sunk into Jack’s tender flesh. Daniel wiped away the drop of bright red blood with a cotton ball soaked in antiseptic, and a solemn face.

They apologized simultaneously.

~~~~

3. Jack was kneeling on the bedroom floor. Daniel slid the much-hated blindfold into place and ran his fingers roughly through Jack’s hair. As he stepped away, a car horn blared outside, and Jack’s body jerked in surprise.

Suddenly he was in another place, another time. He smelled sour sweat, heard booted feet on a cement floor. He struggled internally, clutching desperately at reality. Daniel had just been here, hadn’t he? He wasn’t...

A hand seized his wrist, and a cuff snapped into place. Jack struck out wildly with his free hand. A voice cried out in pain. “Daniel?” A muffled curse answered him.

He pried off the blindfold, and saw Daniel sinking to the floor, curling up with his hands between his legs. Jack scrambled to him on his knees and stared with horror at the greenish-white face that looked up at him in shock.

He reached for his lover with trembling hands. “Sorry. Sorry.”

~~~~

4. Daniel had already come once. His cock was still almost soft when Jack knelt before him and took it into his mouth, and it took a long time just to get a full erection. It would have been easier if he could have used his hands, but they were bound behind his back with a thin leather strap.

His knees ached like hell by the time Daniel's breathing began to deepen. He listened for that hitch, the one that signaled imminent climax, but Daniel wasn't quite there yet. Jack withdrew his mouth for a moment, working his jaw. Daniel's hand, which had been stroking his hair, dropped to his shoulder. "You okay?" he was asked.

Jack nodded, took a deep breath, and swallowed Daniel deep. Fingers dug into his shoulder and then relaxed, as Daniel gave a grunt of pleasure. Jack hollowed his cheeks and sucked as hard as he could, scraping ever-so-lightly with his teeth along the top side of Daniel's cock. In the back of his mind, he was aware that the pain in his knees was trying to tell him something, but he ignored that and focused on bringing his lover to completion.

Daniel finally spurted into Jack's mouth, clutching his hair and moaning his name. Jack swallowed, and knew he was in deep trouble. When he raised his head and saw Daniel smiling down at him happily, he gritted his teeth. "Daniel? I need some help here."

The next morning, after hobbling into the Mountain, he headed straight for the infirmary. As he perched uncomfortably on the side of the examination table, mentally rehearsing his story for Janet, he reflected sadly on the fact that he was an idiot. Daniel had told him so, and in no uncertain terms.

He was in pain, his lover was pissed at him, and a punishment was looming in his future.

If he could have bent his knees, he would have kicked himself.

~~~~

5. Daniel really should have known what would happen. It's not like he hadn't witnessed the phenomenon dozens of times. It really wasn't like it was something Jack could have prevented. It was hardly something that called for using a safeword. I mean, come on!

Jack was bound to the bed, hand and foot, at Daniel’s mercy. Nothing unusual there. They both loved that scenario. The unusual part came when a touch from Daniel caused Jack to twitch and laugh. “Ticklish today, are we?” Daniel asked mischievously. He duplicated his earlier touch, and Jack’s limbs tugged at his bonds. It was automatic to try to double up, protect himself. But he couldn’t. It was strangely exciting. He laughed again.

Soon his laughter was breathless, as Daniel set his skin to shivering, and his heart to pounding, and his cock to leaking. Inevitably, Jack’s eyes grew moist, and his nose began to get that itchy feeling. Long bouts of laughter always had this effect on him. So when Daniel bent over him, and snickered in his face, it wasn’t Jack’s fault.

He sneezed. All over Daniel. Who closed his eyes and jerked his head back, exclaiming in disgust. It totally wasn’t Jack’s fault, and Daniel really should have seen it coming.

No, Jack’s big mistake was in laughing. He laughed, and then he said, unconvincingly, that he was sorry, as Daniel wiped at his face with a tissue. And then he laughed some more.

Daniel was going to make him pay for that. And not necessarily in the good way.

Comments

[janedavitt.livejournal.com]

Ouch... poor boys! Nice, realistic look at the times it doesn't go to plan. And, ooh, you described passing out so well, I got dizzy myself there!

[sid]

I have a multitude of experience to draw on regarding fainting. It was practically a childhood hobby of mine. And I've kept my hand in, so to speak, over the years. :-)

[spacemonkeyphd2.livejournal.com]

Wow, excellent as ever Sid, you describe the senarios so well, it's almost like you've been there. ;) Very well written on what could be a disasterous subject matter.

[sid]

Well, I've never flashed back to Iraq, or wherever Jack thought he was. ;-)

Thanks, Monkey!

[ivorygates]

Oh, very pretty! I think #1 and #3 are my favorites, but wow, it's so hard to choose...

[sid]

I had a little anxiety over #3, but in the end I just left it as vague as possible. I would have ruined it if I tried to be specific about why Jack was flashing back, where he thought he was, what had happened to him there, etc. Because I didn't have a clue!

[ivorygates]

I think that's what makes it work so well, you know? Maybe Jack doesn't even know. And the disorientation he's feeling adds an extra level of 'Whoa!' to the whole thing.

Bravo!

Coolness...

[sid]

Yeah, even if I had had a clear plan, it works better this way. *sighs with relief*

[ivorygates]

There! You see, your plan was so subtle even you didn't know what it was...

[sid]

I'm quite good at that, actually...

[ivorygates]

All part of your Cunning Plan.

And may I say: Whoa! Icon!

[sid]

icon is by or_mabinogi

*pets icon*

[ivorygates]

Pritty icon!

How do you ever decide what to wear when you get up in the morning...?

[sid]

Hey, I was a one-icon gal for a long time! (see above)

Now I have so many pritties. :-)

And I haven't quite filled my total allotment yet!

[ivorygates]

Wow.

(marvels)

[amnellwyvern.livejournal.com]

These are great Sid! I was wondering what scenarios you would come up which for Jack not using his safeword.

[sid]

Thanks, Nell!

I didn't want to go too dark on these, but a certain amount of angst and owies was called for, definitely. Poor boys!

[amnellwyvern.livejournal.com]

Oh my *thud* Where did you get that icon?

[sid]

Remember about a week ago when I asked people to help me fill up my 110 icons?

This one was donated by jokan.

Credit for the icon itself belongs to eddleman in case you want to steal it

[starting-gate.livejournal.com]

#1 just perfect, felt so authentic

#3 love this, would like to see more 'flashback' stuff for Jack, the memories all the bdsm stuff revive have gotta be interesting. I like the blindfold wariness, always adds another dimension to your fic

#5 I was laughing by the first paragraph, I though Jack was gonna wet the bed!
I mean, come on! I love that line, and have no expanation.

Love these

[sid]

I'm glad you liked them! And I had to end with a laugh!

I established in the very first fic I wrote that Jack didn't like the blindfold and only wore it to please Daniel. And in my How It All Began series Jack said that he hated blindfolds even as a kid. Can't you just see Young Jack making excuses not to participate in 'Pin the Tail on the Donkey'?

[starting-gate.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I've read those series, an embarassing number of times once or twice.

OOH! Write that fic! Jack explains to Daniel how it all started and then how it went when he was blindfolded in prison and then wild kinky sex.

Puhleeeeze! I mean, come on! Kidfic and kink, it's pure poetry!

*begs politely*

[sid]

N'uh-uh. Although you beg v. prettily!

*eg*

[wraith816.livejournal.com]

I like the variety here - good mix of the serious and funny. :D

[sid]

There were a lot of really dark places that I could have gone with this request, but, hey, you know me!

mix of the serious and funny

You mean like Daniel getting punched in the nuts? LOL

[paian]

I don't think that Daniel ever actually sneezed on Jack in the movie or very early S1, but there's a hint of symmetry or even payback in that last one that appeals to me. :-)

Enjoyed all of these, #1 and #3 especially. #1 hints at punishment to come but feels gratifyingly complete just as is (what Jane said about the sensation of passing out, well done) (and I'm glad for the preexisting dizziness condition there, since it seems like an awfully fun toy it would be a shame to toss out), but #3 touches on some serious issues that would come up in this relationship ... makes me crave a long consequences/exploration fic ... have you looked at this in any of the previous fics in the series? am I having an attack of premature senility?

[sid]

Ha! I wasn't even thinking about Daniel's sneezy period! *g*

I'm sure the next time they try the toy from #1, they're going to use a different position. And it's just possible that Jack forgot to eat lunch, so he won't be making that mistake again.

I think I've only touched very lightly on Jack's issues in previous fics. Jack got a little nervous the first time Daniel bound his hands, but reminded himself that Daniel was not the enemy, and that this was something desirable and exciting.

He used his safeword when Daniel took a strap to his back, because that brought up bad memories, and they agreed to avoid that area in the future since it would be the opposite of arousing for Jack.

And he told Daniel he had hated blindfolds since childhood, but that turned out to be something Daniel wasn't willing to give up, but he's considerate about using one.

Obviously, being blindfolded by the enemy must be terrifying for Jack, but I don't think I have the knowledge or insight to go exploring that aspect of his psyche. Ooh, dark and scary. *shivers*

[paian]

Oh, good, OK -- without looking back, I remembered all of those but the avoiding-using-the-strap-on-the-back. I love that the series acknowledges that part of Jack's history but doesn't hammer it too hard -- and honestly, I think sometimes what make me yearn for more narrative exploration of something is that the story already resonates with so much and says so much, just as is, and really no more is needed. And yay for the future of the toy! (under better circumstances) *g*

[stacy-l.livejournal.com]

LOL! Very interesting and enjoyable indeed and I could so SEE these things happening. Ah poor Daniel and poor Jack...he really should use that safe word when it's needed...

Thanks for sharing!

[sid]

Yep, Jack needs to work on his communication skills. LOL

Very glad you enjoyed!

[stacy-l.livejournal.com]

Yes he does. But you know what? That would be so like Jack not to say it when it's needed thinking he can handle anything Daniel throws his way.

Thanks again for sharing!

[el-gilliath.livejournal.com]

Sneezing! Oh god, poor Danny.

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant.

[sid]

*achoo*

:-D

Thanks very much!

[animehime.livejournal.com]

Ooh! These are great! Just thought I'd let you know. =)

[sid]

That is always so nice to hear! Thanks very much!

[angiepen.livejournal.com]

Stubborn turkey. [thwaps Jack] [snickers]

Fun. :)

Angie

[sid]

Thanks Angie! No hitting Jack, though. That's Daniel's job. ;-)

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

Liked this a lot. Nice to see things not going quite right.

[sid]

LOL, I'm usually nicer to them! But apparently, on request, I can inflict a few owies. It's more realistic, I guess. :-)

[nangi-akki.livejournal.com]

AAAAAAAH!! AAAAAAAH!! You did it - you *did* it!! YAAAAAY!!
I adore them all - so creative and true to life - but I think my favorites are 1 and 3 ...and 4...and 2...and... :)
thankyouthankyouthankyou!!

[sid]

*quiet glee*

It was a great prompt. And my ONLY one, so far. Shh!

You're so very welcome.

[nangi-akki.livejournal.com]

nice icon btw - yours and mine make a nice pair.
do you have bittorrent? there's an MFU ep (The Terbuf Affair) up on mininova right now
http://www.mininova.org/tor/416069

[sid]

I have heard of bittorrent, but have no idea what it actually is. *shrugs*

I'll check out the url, and see what I can see.

[no-eden.livejournal.com]

I just fell onto the floor laughing. Bad!sex fics rock. This is amazing.

[sid]

I'm glad these gave you a good giggle! Poor boys, we shouldn't laugh. ;-)

[tresa-cho.livejournal.com]

Ahaha. I like 5. Nicely done.

[sid]

#5's a giggler, isn't it? Thanks!!

[maab-connor.livejournal.com]

oh awesome! so much love for these 5! mostly b/c it's a realistic BDSM relationship w/ love and laughter; for which you get cookies!

[sid]

Num! Cookies! :-)

Glad you enjoyed these - this was my very, very first Five Things. SO long ago....